pre-crit

pre-critique with small groups- Make flavors type larger.  Maybe add tree top to the bottom of the ending screen. speed up the snowflakes.  Add blur on the candy passing by.

Mr. Pannifino- spoke to me and told me to maybe bring the candy circles in to the end to make up for the speed up time of the flavors passing by. Also ad more of a button to make the call to action clearer and that you can click on the ad to do that call to action.

final works

long banner ad: the snowflakes go by slower in this one than the smaller one. but i think it works ok still.  if i would change anything it would be to make the snowflakes go by a little faster.

Square banner ad: this one the snowflakes go by much faster than in the long one.  I think it is more successful with the ending frame with these dimensions.  But for the snowflakes going through and readability the long one works better. because of the longer time the snowflakes have to go across the full screen.

If i was to change anything it would be the snowflakes coming through at a speed that is between the first and second banner ad.  That would be a perfect medium.