Monday, September 24, 2012

story board critique

here is my storyboard for the MTV bumper. The point i'm trying to get across with this is that i am bored as MTV now.  When i am bored i doodle and make planes, and spitballs and other things like this. some suggestions i got during critique are to...show the plane folding itself up in the beginning to show more of a story line, use stop motion type animation instead of smooth animation to fly the plane across the screen and unfold the paper,  also instead of the show title on the plane have the plane reveal the show behind it.

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